I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ellakaye, This is such a well written recount. Well done for using paragraphs. You are getting better and better at writing in paragraphs. I really like how you have set your presentation on transition mode. Manpreet
Hi Ellakaye. I love what you did on your holiday and the describing words you have add on. The most interesting part that I love about your holiday is when you had a Easter egg hunt in the dark. My question is was it fun hanging out with your cousins?
Hi Ellakaye,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a well written recount. Well done for using paragraphs. You are getting better and better at writing in paragraphs. I really like how you have set your presentation on transition mode.
Manpreet
Hi Ellakaye. I love what you did on your holiday and the describing words you have add on. The most interesting part that I love about your holiday is when you had a Easter egg hunt in the dark. My question is was it fun hanging out with your cousins?
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