I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ellakaye, I like the way you made this poster and what the poster says on it. maybe next time you could write a blurb about the task. This poster is fun and special. Kyvana from Ahipara School.
Kia Ora Ellakaye, My name is Ema. I'm from your class and I love how you managed your work and how it looks. What I would want to fix is what you put on the bottom because I think you put nicknames that I don't really understand but overall I would agree what you typed on your post. Keep the good work up.
Kia Ora Ellakaye, My name is Nese and I am in your class Room 11. I like how you made your work nice and neat but would you add more sentences to your work so you can approve in your reading or writing.
Hi Ellakaye,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you made this poster and what the poster says on it.
maybe next time you could write a blurb about the task.
This poster is fun and special.
Kyvana from Ahipara School.
Kia Ora Ellakaye,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ema. I'm from your class and I love how you managed your work and how it looks.
What I would want to fix is what you put on the bottom because I think you put nicknames that I don't really understand but overall I would agree what you typed on your post.
Keep the good work up.
Kia Ora Ellakaye, My name is Nese and I am in your class Room 11. I like how you made your work nice and neat but would you add more sentences to your work so you can approve in your reading or writing.
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