I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Ellakaye and Victoria this is Ema and Victoria. We like the punctuation's you have added to your story and we love how interesting your story is. We have no heads up or questions for you.
Kai ora Ellakaye. This is Aysha from your class I really enjoyed reading your narrative I loved the planning it was great. I have no question's but I'll try to think of some in the future. Ok bye :)
Hello Ellakaye and Victoria this is Ema and Victoria. We like the punctuation's you have added to your story and we love how interesting your story is. We have no heads up or questions for you.
ReplyDeleteKai ora Ellakaye. This is Aysha from your class I really enjoyed reading your narrative I loved the planning it was great. I have no question's but I'll try to think of some in the future. Ok bye :)
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