I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Ellakaye this is Ema your friend. I love your story about the school bully, it was INTERESTING to read and just loved it! Your background was so beautiful and loved the colour of your background. I liked how you kept it simple and nice! Keep up the good work Ellakaye! But maybe next time you should fix some mistakes because I found some mistake but your narrative was amazing. I got no questions for you.
Hello Ellakaye this is Ema your friend. I love your story about the school bully, it was INTERESTING to read and just loved it! Your background was so beautiful and loved the colour of your background. I liked how you kept it simple and nice! Keep up the good work Ellakaye! But maybe next time you should fix some mistakes because I found some mistake but your narrative was amazing. I got no questions for you.
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