I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Your Bravery poster is good, going up the worlds highest mountain is defiantly a brave feat especially as they (him and Tenzing) did it without the knowledge and technological support that people have today. The pictures you've chosen tell a nice story and passing of time. I especially like the left-side picture as it gives me an image to connect to when you say he was just a normal boy from Tauka. I'd love to have heard more detail about the dangers and what they had to be brave in the face of.
Your posts are really good so far Ellakaye, I hope you carry on with the SLJ activities and find some really interesting and fun tasks. See you in the comments.
Hey Ellakaye,
ReplyDeleteYour Bravery poster is good, going up the worlds highest mountain is defiantly a brave feat especially as they (him and Tenzing) did it without the knowledge and technological support that people have today. The pictures you've chosen tell a nice story and passing of time. I especially like the left-side picture as it gives me an image to connect to when you say he was just a normal boy from Tauka. I'd love to have heard more detail about the dangers and what they had to be brave in the face of.
Your posts are really good so far Ellakaye, I hope you carry on with the SLJ activities and find some really interesting and fun tasks. See you in the comments.
Daniel :)