I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wonderful poem, I especially enjoyed the punchline "And wait for aliens to come in their car" - it works because even though they're usually in spaceships, we could say that a spaceship is a mode of transport that is similar to a car. It was a stretch but it really worked!
Hey, don't forget to attribute your images - do you know how to do that? I'll keep an eye on this post in case you respond.
Kia ora Ellakaye
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem, I especially enjoyed the punchline "And wait for aliens to come in their car" - it works because even though they're usually in spaceships, we could say that a spaceship is a mode of transport that is similar to a car. It was a stretch but it really worked!
Hey, don't forget to attribute your images - do you know how to do that?
I'll keep an eye on this post in case you respond.
Ngā mihi
Jordan